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Hi Holly, my name is Angela and am from Gisborne Intermediate. I really like you poem about Animals, you are very good at rhyming, I like how you talked about different animals and how you are telling a story with you in it. maybe next time make the image bigger.
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Hi Hollly,
ReplyDeleteI really like your Poem about animals.
You must of worked really hard on it rhyming.
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Hi Holly, my name is Angela and am from Gisborne Intermediate. I really like you poem about Animals, you are very good at rhyming, I like how you talked about different animals and how you are telling a story with you in it. maybe next time make the image bigger.
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